Tuesday, August 8, 2017

Fanon Timeline

As I move the background and history over to my World Anvil page, this timeline is being truncated. Click here for the timeline on World Anvil.


I've been doing a lot of work on history & background for my fanon Order and associated hangers-on (like Danforth and the Athanasians). I made some notes regarding the overall history here but recently I've spent some time developing an actual timeline, which I present here.

This timeline is a work-in-progress, and will return and update it as I change or clarify things. Links within the timeline are either to posts in this blog about the subject or event in question, or external articles (particularly for canon events). Fanon events are shown in bolded italics with canon events shown in normal text. I have avoided great detail in the descriptions; these are just historical highlights rather than exact descriptions.

For dates of canon events, I have used the best information I can find, but have avoided saying "circa", instead presuming all canon dates are potentially inaccurate. Despite recent revelations / retcons of the "current year" (Guilliman discovering it could be early M41 rather than early M42), I have presumed the Thirteenth Black Crusade began in 999.M41 and lasted 112 years to 111.M42. A description of the Imperial dating system can be found here.


mid M36 onwardsThe 'Dust Zone becomes more and more heavily industrialized, polluted and cramped. Accommodation zones for the workers (on the outskirts) are encroached on by both the factories expanding and the temple precincts pushing outwards. The Via Imperator itself is left untouched, but the river becomes so polluted with runoff, metal dust and soot it appears metallic and is known as the Steel River.
744.M41The Silent King returns to the galaxy and begins to awaken the Tomb Worlds to fight the Tyranids. The Seer of Corrinto predicts the Time of Ending; his prophecy is suppressed by the Inquisition but spreads as rumors. Verity decides she has absorbed enough of the Seraph's coils and it is time leave the Crystal Vault.
744 to 750.M41Explicit veneration of Verity grows in the 'Dust Zone. Initially, the Ecclesiarchy is unconcerned - the cult of Verity is approved and, due to the Via Imperator, widespread. However, the 'Dust Zone cult begins to depart from the norm, with icons being produced showing her as a winged serpent. They attend Ecclesiarchy services, but hold their own additional prayer meetings. A core group of women form, living in community and speaking of Verity as if she were a real person. They advocate for the workers of the 'Dust Zone, starting a school and charitable organs.
750.M41Rumors that the "Daughters of Verity" cannot lie or be lied to demand an investigation. Ultimately, a charge of heresy is made and the Cardinal of Ophelia convenes a trial. The Ecclesiarch intervenes, adjourning the court, dismissing the charges, declaring the Daughters innocent and elevating them to the rank of Ecclesiarchal Prelature Militant. He grants them the peak of the mountain for their Cloister-Fortress, permitting them to build a chapel around the statue of Verity (and incorporating the pillars).
750.M41 onwardsThe Cloister-Fortress and chapel are built and the Order begins formalizing its education and recruitment practices, establishing relationships with the Adeptus Mechanicus of the 'Dust Zone to obtain materiel.


994.M41Danforth hears rumors about a Sister of Battle who became pregnant and left her child beneath Saint Danforth's statue. He conducts further investigations on Ophelia, accompanied by Anastacia. He confronts Shania who, unable to lie and unwilling to remain silent, tells him the truth (including that he has a twin Sister). Danforth reverts to the name Laertes and confronts Cygnus, executing him. At his trial, he is exonerated of any wrongdoing and elevated to the rank of Inquisitor, assuming responsibilities in the Ophelia sector, frequently accompanied by Alicia (to whom he does not yet reveal her family history). Anastacia is released by Stark and switches to the Ordo Malleus.
998.M41Third War of Armageddon; Laertes adjudicates the trial of the Athanasians, who become an informal part of his entourage, receiving modified Custodian armor stored within the Crystal Vault from Verity (whom they venerate as a Saint of the Imperial Cult).
999.M41Thirteenth Black Crusade; the Order is assigned by the Ecclesiarch to defend and police the Ophelia system. Laertes and his entourage remain in the Ophelia Sector for the duration of the fall of Cadia, the Celestinian and Terran Crusades and the rise of the Primarch. Anastacia Ternovnik (newly elevated to the rank of Inquisitor) and Jessica Stark fight in the defense of the Gate - Ternovnik leading her entourage and Grey Knights in surgical strikes against Daemonic positions in the Cadia sector, Stark crushing traitor cells on Cadia. Both are presumed lost.
1st cent.M42The Noctis Aeterna & the Indomitus Crusade. The Ophelia sector is forced onto the defensive until an arm of the Indomitus Crusade reaches Ophelia, bringing with it the news of the Primarch's return. Guilliman's rejection of cruelty and bureaucracy resonates with Laertes and the Order. They join the Crusade, focused on investigation of Chaos cults rather than pitched battles. Verity is seen more often, utilizing more of the Seraph's abilities. Tensions over her grow.
111.M42The end of the Indomitus Crusade and the Triumph of Raukos. Guilliman returns to Ultramar to fight in the Plague Wars. A Primaris Council is assigned to the Order. It becomes increasingly clear factions in the Mechanicus, Astartes and Ecclesiarchy are moving against Verity, Laertes and the Order - rumored to be unified behind one who knows Laertes well and bears the rosette of the Inquisition.
Current eventsCryptic pronouncements from the Metatrix and Seraphim, and dire warnings in the Emperor's tarot; "The Fingers of the Dragon's Hand reach out. Mag'ladroth is stirring - soon he will wake." Ternovnik returns, having been taken by Trazyn the Infinite at the climax of the battle for Cadia and, together with her Grey Knights and the Daemons they were fighting, displayed in a prismatic tableau in the galleries on Solemnace. The Necron releases her to bring confirmation and aid to Laertes and the Order; Mag'ladroth's followers will find the Serpents and they will wake the Dragon. The beginning of the Ophidian Crusade. It is during the Ophidian Crusade that Alicia discovers she is Danforth's brother and Shania's daughter.

Let me know what you think!

=][= Danforth Laertes

Sunday, July 16, 2017

Plans for 'Post-Rift' Background for the Order of Our Crystal Lady

All of the history & background I have created so-far for the Order of Our Crystal Lady is not only set before the "current time" but was invented by me before the release of the 8th edition with its timeline and lore "advancement" (I haven't written down everything, but I do know what happens!) The question was asked in a Facebook group I am a member of ("what are you doing with your fluff post-rift?" was the way it was formulated) and so I gave some thought to it. Here is a vomiting of unformed thoughts into a blogpost in no particular order!

Firstly, some general thoughts about the setting of 40K. This Dakka-Dakka thread (spoilers!) not only does a good job of summarizing the changes and events in the new setting, but also identifies potential sources of conflict and presents some very well-thought-out theorizing of where things could go. While the changes are significant and open up some very interesting questions and storytelling opportunities, they don't fundamentally change the nature of the setting - the Imperium is still a benighted realm of ignorance and superstition, teetering on the brink of destruction, beset by foes both inside and out. There are new players - Guilliman and Cawl, in the main - but the old players are still there and playing much the same roles. The Emperor is still on the Golden Throne and Abaddon is still making war on the Imperium and the Dragon still slumbers on Mars. Even the new players' presence doesn't detract from that - yes, Guilliman is now effectively running the Imperium but it is a realm of a million worlds (even half-a-million on this side of the Rift) and he cannot possibly have a complete influence. What GW have done with this "advancement" is more expand the setting than actually change it, if that makes sense.

I think I can confidently say major changes - and I am thinking specifically of the death of the Emperor or the fall of Terra or the awakening of the Dragon of Mars (even just the revelation of specifically and explicitly what the Dragon of Mars is) - aren't going to happen in this edition or any edition. The "grimdark mystery" of 40K is something GW aren't going to want to mess with and "five minutes to midnight" is absolutely fundamental to the setting. Everything is going to carry on much as it did before, just with the addition of the new players.

Similarly, any advancement of my Order's background must avoid such dramatic changes (no resurrection of the Emperor!) and must also be able to work within future revelations (whatever they may be). I need to keep my Order's background both in the background and sufficiently vague.

So, bearing all that in mind, here are some things I have decided. Note that these bullet points contain both post-Rift background for my Order, but also notes about events I'd already decided on but not written / published;
  • I see no reason to change the background for the foundation of the Order at all; when the Silent King returns to the galaxy and awakens the Tomb Worlds to fight the Tyranids (c. 744.M41), Verity emerges from the Crystal Vault. She has spent the last 10,000 years sequentially freeing and defeating / absorbing "coils" of the Seraph's programming. There is much of the Necron construct left behind code-locks in the Vault, but Verity has absorbed enough of it that she not only possesses much of its power but is aware of the Silent King's call.
  • Speaking through visions, locutions and other supernatural phenomena, Verity gathers a small band of female followers from the inhabitants of the 'Dust Zone. The leaders of the Convents and other high-ranking prelates are distrustful of this new group - they claim to follow a saint whom the Ecclesiarchy's intelligentsia believe to be nothing more than a pious fiction, and are also a challenge to existing power structures. However, the Ecclesiarch is sympathetic (rumored to be because Verity visits him) and not only offers them political protection, but also grants them a charter as an Ecclesiarchal Prelature Militant (essentially a Sisters of Battle Minor Order answering directly to him) and gives them part of the Via Imperator for their cloister-fortress.
  • As detailed here, the Order of Our Crystal Lady takes as its charism the protection, education and care of the workers in the 'Dust Zone (what was the mountain region surrounding the Via Imperator, the Emperor's edict long-since ignored or forgotten, became). It participates in Crusades with the Convent Sanctorum and performs specific missions for the Ecclesiarch. It also pursues the inscrutable goals of Verity and works closely with the Inquisition, who find the unique (and inexplicable) ability of Daughters of Verity to neither lie nor be lied to useful.
  • Three of my major characters - Canoness Shania, Palatine Alicia and Inquisitor Danforth Laertes - were created by me many years ago (when the first iteration of the Thirteenth Black Crusade was being played out in 3rd edition, since retconned away). Then, my intention had been to have them at the peak of their power and influence during the Black Crusade. Alicia - a loyal follower of Laertes and his lover (yes . . .) - was going to be sacrificed by him in a (fruitless) attempt to kill Abaddon (a anvilicious "the Inquisition are heartlessly pragmatic" moment). That aspect of their relationship was (thankfully!) dropped for the new background, but others remained.
  • With the advancement of the timeline, I had decided to have the three of them be the leaders of the Order during the Indomitus Crusade, and place the beginnings of Laertes' and Alicia's (who are contemporaries) careers just before the Thirteenth Black Crusade in 999.M41.
  • Danforth is an orphan of the 'Dust Zone of Ophelia VII; his family is not known and (as is the policy) he is adopted into the ruling family and given the family name Laertes. He is taught in the Order's schools but manifests psychic powers when he hits puberty, and a literal witch hunt (with pitchforks and torches) chases him through the streets. He is saved from being burned alive by a Sister of the Order called Shania who (because she cannot be lied to) knows the accusations against him are lies; he is certainly psychic but not in league with dangerous powers. She hands him over to the Arbites who pass him to the Black Ships. En route to Terra, he is recruited by the Inquisition.
  • During her first action as a Novice, fighting alongside Blood Angels, all of Alicia's squad and the accompanying Marine squad are wiped out by artillery fire with the exception of her and a veteran sergeant. They fight through the enemy forces (in the original background, this was Slaaneshi Marines and corrupted Sisters - but such things are gratuitous and so that will be changed) but he is grievously wounded protecting her. Rather than allow his geneseed to be lost, he orders her to cut it out of him - but the organic tissue cannot survive outside of statis or a living body. She cuts her own flesh open and puts the progenoids inside her. They do not, of course, turn her into a Space Marine or anything ridiculous - these are progenoids, not implants cultured from them; they simply attach themselves to her bloodstream and draw nourishment from it, keeping themselves alive. But geneseed is more than merely biological - it has a psychic component, especially Blood Angels geneseed. Alicia is wracked by visions and temptations - Black Rage visions of fighting Horus and temptations from Ka'bandha to fall to Chaos in exchange for martial skill. She resists these, fights her way through the lines, and returns the progenoids to the Chapter. However, she remains "touched" by Sanguinius - a significant (perhaps the most significant) saint in the Imperial Cult - and so she quickly rises to a position of both military and spiritual leadership in the Order, becoming a very young member of the Palatine Council.
  • Laertes serves as an Interrogator for a number of years, rising to the rank of Inquisitor of the Ordo Hereticus around the same time Alicia is made a Palatine (to replace Shania who has been appointed Canoness). His first action is to return to Ophelia VII and all-but-confront Shania - he has uncovered evidence which suggests she is his mother.
  • Unable to lie and unwilling to be silent, she confirms this. She was raped when a Postulant by an Inquisitor making use of the Order's unique talents. When accused, he fervently denied it, casting Shania as a slut and whore, but the Order's inability to lie or be lied to means they know the truth. The Ecclesiarch - knowing what Daughters of Verity are capable of - sided with the Order and found it politically expedient to go against the Inquisition at that time. The Inquisitor (unable to be brought to trial by anyone other than a fellow Inquisitor) fled Ophelia. Rather than abort the baby, she brought him to term and handed him over to the orphanage.
  • (In terms of age, Shania was raped when she was a young Postulant - sixteen - and gave birth to Danforth when she was 17. Danforth and Alicia are around the same age; she was 18 when she fought alongside the Blood Angels and became a Palatine in her mid 20s which was when Danforth became an Inquisitor, making Shania in her early 40s. Such ages are quite young for 40K - although Eisenhorn is described as being in his 40s in Xenos, and he seems to have been an Inquisitor for a while - but this is justifiable if they are exceptional individuals in a small Order.)
  • Danforth leaves Ophelia on Inquisition business, taking Alicia and a detachment of Sisters with him. It is during this period that he encounters the Athanasians. (I will probably edit the background so that the suits of armor worn by the renegade Marines are the ancient suits of Custodian armor trapped inside the Crystal Vault, repaired and modified by Verity . . . who has taken a definite interest in Danforth as a son of the 'Dust Zone and one of her Daughters. It may also be good to set this event during the Third War for Armageddon - many Chapters are represented there.)
  • During the Thirteenth Black Crusade, Danforth, the Athansians and the Order are tasked by the Ecclesiarch with policing the 'Dust Zone in particular and the Ophelia system in general - with Chaos on the ascendant, cults and subversive organizations have appeared, and it is vital to the Convent Sanctorum's war effort that not only does materiel keep flowing to Sororitas forces on the front lines, but that sabotage and treachery do not occur. They are far away from the fall of Cadia, the Celestinian and Terran Crusades and the rise of the Primarch.
  • They are - along with all the forces of the Ophelia system - forced onto the defensive after the appearance of the Great Rift, defending against Chaos armies. An arm of the Indomitus Crusade comes to Ophelia, bringing relief forces and allowing the Sororitas to drive Chaos back.
  • The Indomitus Crusade is too large an undertaking to simply be a single force rampaging through the galaxy - it must be a series of smaller actions and armies, multiple campaigns being mounted, running their course and then new armies being raised (the Crusade is canonically stated to last for more than one hundred years - that is four generations of humans, and so there would be Guardsmen fighting in the Crusade whose grandfathers had not been born when it started!)
  • News of the Primarch's return comes to Danforth and the Order - both react positively to what he is doing; Danforth is heavily influenced by the outlook of the Order (a reverence for truth as well as compassion and fairness towards regular citizens) and so Guilliman's rejection of cruelty and bureaucracy resonates with them. They join the Crusade, but more focused on investigation of Chaos cults and so forth rather than pitched battles.
  • As the Crusade progresses, Verity is seen more and more often - she has now absorbed enough "coils" of the Seraph that she can now act as it acted during the War in Heaven; it is not just a single war machine, but rather a vast construct capable of producing entire armies of robotic warrior constructs, a lynchpin in the war plan of the one who created it. She adopts larger, more fearsome and more monstrous forms in combat, and creates ever-growing phalanxes of metallic soldiery to send against the enemies of Man.
  • The Mechanicus of Ophelia have always suspected this was the case, and have been studying Verity warily and from afar since her first appearance. Now, a faction within the Mechanicus (a faction perhaps connected with Cawl, perhaps the Cult of the Dragon, perhaps both) show a significant interest in her.
  • Tensions over Verity grow; she and her legions are clearly recognizable as at least related to Necrons, and it becomes increasingly difficult for the Ecclesiarch to defend the Order. Factions of the Inquisition see it as an opportunity to move against Danforth (who also has enemies within the Astartes because of his support for the Athanasians). Mechanicus factions also want to gain access to / possession of Verity (either to destroy, imprison or study and reverse engineer, depending on their philosophy).
  • The Metatrix and Seraphim make more and more cryptic pronouncements, and dire warnings are seen in the Emperor's tarot. "The Fingers of the Dragon's Hand reach out. Mag'ladroth is stirring - soon he will wake." Danforth leads his team to investigate and, after piecing together scraps of information, rumor and fragments of records in sealed Inquisition libraries, realizes the truth.
  • The Void Dragon of Mars, Mag'ladroth the C'tan, was imprisoned on Mars by the Emperor in eons past and has slumbered in the Noctis Labyrinth for millennia, its dreams influencing the Mechanicum and then Mechanicus of Mars. Legend tells that this star god's created warriors were nigh-invincible and that they could not be defeated, only driven back or imprisoned.
  • Mag'ladroth created the Seven Serpents - insanely sophisticated artificial constructs capable of reforming their software into legions of war machines - to serve as both his generals and armies. A Serpent could form itself into a legion of infantry, a battlefleet of void ships, or a single titanic war engine capable of laying waste to entire planets. A fully-functioning Serpent was more than a match for almost any army that could be brought against it, not only because of its power and strength, but also because its single animating intelligence - which grew and learned at a terrifying rate - could react and control its manifold elements in perfect harmony and without hesitation.
  • The Seraph of the Crystal Vault of Ophelia was, of course, one of the Serpents - imprisoned there by the Void Dragon's ancient foes. It had not been truly defeated; instead, its programming had been modified so its software was code-locked into the Vault itself. In her lonely battle against it, imbued with the Emperor's power, Verity had sequentially unlocked its coils, defeating each one and bringing its power under the control of her will and personality.
  • Another one of the Serpents had been Asirnoth, the great silver wyrm of Medusa. There, the Old Ones had fragmented the Serpent by editing its network protocols, breaking it into hundreds or thousands of smaller, weaker constructs. These were the relic machine-creatures the Primarch Ferrus Manus of the Iron Hands Legion defeated in the legendary mythohistories of the Medusan people and Iron Hands Astartes, culminating in his final battle with the central code-fragment of the Serpent, the wyrm Asirnoth, which he defeated by holding it a river of magma.
  • The location and status of the five remaining Serpents are unknown; but the cryptic pronouncements (there are five "fingers" on a hand) make it clear they are not destroyed. Likely, they are imprisoned or weakened as Asirnoth and the Seraph were. The risk (and goal of Mag'ladroth's followers) is clear - that the Serpents will be freed and brought together, and that Mag'ladroth will be woken from his prison on Mars.
  • And so begins the next phase of the Order's life - supported by Danforth and the Athansians, they (supported by the elements of the Ophelian armed forces - including elements of the Mechanius . . . who they might not entirely trust) set out on a crusade to find and destroy the five remaining Serpents of Mag'ladroth, the Fingers of the Dragon's Hand. Guilliman has announced his triumph at the conclusion of the Indomitus Crusade, but all is not well in the Imperium - Cawl's ambition is worrying, and his eagerness to embrace innovation causes great concern. It is possible he is influenced, or will be influenced, or is influencing, the Cult of the Dragon on Mars - and that they, consciously or not, are working to find and release the Serpents. Cawl or other hereteks like him would want to find the Serpents - to study them and learn their secrets. Perhaps some would be foolish enough to want to release Mag'ladroth, not understanding or caring about the dangers posed.
  • Further complicating matters is the arrival of a Primaris Council - a group of 18 Marines (drawn from each of the original Legions) - as tactical advisors to the Order and Danforth. These are a post-Indomitus development - perhaps coming directly from Cawl, but details are fragmentary. The idea is that these Marines will both provide tactical advice and learn from the rest of the Imperial war machine - many such Councils have been sent out. But the concern is that they may be spies for Cawl or Guilliman, and the presence of Traitor geneseed is a grave concern (rumors swirl that Guilliman forbade it, but also that Gulliman allowed it, and the plan of Marines from different geneseed working together to avoid rivalries is entirely in keeping with Gulliman's known-policy of the Unnumbered Sons . . .) The Marines of Primaris Council are beginning to show development of personalities reflecting their Primarchs and Legions . . . something which is really weird, because they weren't raised in that environment, and is it really possible that personality is genetic?
  • In addition to all this, of course, are tensions between the various factions who do not understand Verity or who are enemies of Danforth.
So those are ALL the notes to bring the background up to speed. As I said, lots of "spoilers" there - and perhaps some will be edited or changed. What I have tried to do is give a clear mission for the Order, a mission that can bring them into conflict or alliance with anyone or everyone ("there is only war!"), and which isn't likely to conflict with future canon. The various tensions and schisms between the different groups in the Imperium won't contradict any of this - the only thing that could do it is the waking of Mag'ladroth . . . which I don't think is going to happen.

And even if it does it doesn't invalidate the Order's mission of trying to find the Serpents - it just means another method was found to wake the Dragon. Even my seeming hard-and-fast declaration that Mag'ladroth = C'tan = Void Dragon = Dragon of Mars isn't insurmountable if contradicted; "Danforth was wrong".

(It wouldn't be the first time.)

Anyway - lots of notes. Let me know what you think!

=][= Danforth Laertes

Sunday, July 2, 2017

House Rules for Inquisitorial Warbands

In previous editions of 40K, there were rules for mixed units of Inquisitorial henchmen, designed to represent the ragtag band of heroes, anti-heroes, sidekicks and hangers-on that work with an Inquisitor (for example, Betancourt, Bequin and Amos et al working with Inquisitor Eisenhorn). Under the 8th edition rules, this is not possible - partially because of the new way characters (even previously "squad upgrade", non-independent characters) work in 40K (as individual units), but also because the rules just don't have that degree of granularity currently.

Hopefully, this will change with the Inquisition Codex release - but perhaps not, because 8th edition does seem to be simpler, quicker game and this kind of complexity does make the game more fiddly. These suggested house rules certainly do!

For that reason, these rules are (of course) only to be used in friendly games and with the permission of your opponent. They are intended to allow players to field a characterful and unique Inquisitorial warband, not to gain a massive gaming advantage or create a "death star" unit. Model selection should be made with a view to background and lore - ideally, each model in the warband should have a name and a (short) biography, a reason for why and how he serves the Inquisitor.

An "Inquisitorial Warband" is a new Detachment type, consisting of one compulsory HQ (which must have the INQUISITOR Keyword), one compulsory Elite (which must be a unit of Inquisitorial Acolytes), up to a single Dedicated Transport model with the IMPERIUM Faction Keyword, up to five models selected from Troops, and up to five models selected from Elites. Models selected from Troops and / or Elites must have the IMPERIUM Faction Keyword and the INFANTRY Keyword, and cannot have the FLY or JUMP PACK Keywords. Fulfilling the requirements for this Detachment grants zero Command Points.

The total number of models selected from Troops and / or Elites with the IMPERIUM Faction Keyword cannot exceed the number of models in the Inquisitorial Acolytes unit. The total number of models in the Detachment (including the Inquisitor, but excluding the dedicated transport) cannot exceed 11.

Models selected from Troops and / or Elites are selected as individual models, not as units. Ignore the usual unit composition rules and instead select (any) single model from the chosen unit. You may take any upgrades, weapon choices etc. allowed by the unit's datasheet. You may only choose a single model from any one datasheet. Pay the appropriate points cost as determined by the appendix for that Faction for each model. *

Each model so chosen functions as an individual unit. It retains all its existing rules, Abilities and Keywords, and gains the following Abilities;

Inquisitorial Henchman: All models from the same Detachment with this rule must remain within 2" of that Detachment's Acolyte unit. If the Acolyte unit is destroyed, all models with this Ability from the same Detachment must remain within 2" of another model from the same Detachment with this Ability. This restriction is removed when only a single model with this rule remains from the same Detachment.

"I'm With The Boss": When embarking or embarked on the same Transport as the model with the INQUISITOR Keyword from the same Detachment, the model gains the Ability Authority of the Inquisition.

"Sidekick, not Redshirt": If the model is within 2" of a model with the ACOLYTE Keyword from the same Detachment, it gains the effects of the CHARACTER Keyword in the shooting phase only (i.e. cannot be targeted in the shooting phase unless it is the closest model). It does not gain the CHARACTER Keyword (unless it already has it).

These additional Abilities are designed to both require and allow the models to remain with the Inquisitorial Acolytes unit, while giving them a degree of protection from shooting. Certain models will not be well-served by being included in an Inquisitorial Warband (assassins, for example) and others might not fit the lore very well (Space Marines in particular). The Warband rules are intended to allow the creation of a characterful selection of models, not an overly powerful unit; there are many ways these rules can be abused and players should be sensitive to this. An opponent can not only refuse to allow these rules to be used, but also refuse a particular expression of these rules. I created these rules as a bit of fun, and they should be used as such.

* Obviously, these rules do not work well when designing an army a Power Level. I suppose it would be possible to work out the PR for a single model, but that sort of granularity is better served by points. If you have to use these with Power Levels, it might work to figure the points and then divide them by 20 (which seems to be about the ratio) to get an idea of PR. But that certainly would be a fudge.

Let me know what you think!

=][= Danforth Laertes

"Magdalena" Apostle-Class Knight-Titan pt II: Rules

I'd decided to build a Knight-Titan for my Sisters of Battle army not only before 8th edition was released, but before it was announced. If I had given any thought to gaming with it, I would have fielded it as an allied Knight (as pretty much any Imperial army could do in 7th) using the old workhorse of "count as". Magdalena (a piece of background which I feel is relevant; no-one calls her "Maggie" twice within earshot of a member of the Order . . .) is armed with a power fist and melta weapon; there would be some similar configuration I could field.

In 8th edition, of course, the same could be done - the Knight Errant has a thermal cannon and can upgrade its reaper chainsword for a thunderstrike gauntlet. The Errant's heavy stubber would have to stand in for the anti-infantry torso guns and the heavy flamers on the back of the power fist would just have to be cosmetic and have no in-game effect.

But the unique army construction method of 8th edition gives a different option. The datasheets detail the weapons a model may be armed with and appendices give the costs for those weapons and the basic model in points. It is, theoretically, possible to arm any model in an army with any weapon available to that army (or even any weapon at all) by simply adding up the points.

Of course, some common sense has to be (or maybe should be) applied - vehicle-only weapons shouldn't go on infantry, for example, and the number of weapons should be reasonable. One should also only use weapons from a different Faction whose costs are comparable to those in your Faction (one element of the cost of a weapon is the BS or WS of the model using it). And, naturally, any unique entries so created can only be used in friendly games and with your opponent's permission.

But with all that, it was very easy to come up with the rules and points values for Magdalena. Each of the five Knight classes has an identical profile and special rules - the only difference is in the weapon loadout - and each model has the same points cost (320) in the appendix. A basic Knight "chassis", therefore, has no weapons, the Knight Abilities, and costs 320 points.

Magdalena's weapons loadout is obvious just by looking at her; she has a thunderstrike gauntlet, a thermal cannon, titanic feet, twin heavy flamers on the back of the fist, and torso-mounted anti-infantry guns (which look like overscaled hurricane bolters). The first three weapons are easy to select from the Questor Imperialis appendix - 35pts, 76pts and 0pts respectively. The other two are a little trickier, because they are not standard Knight weapons (and it isn't entirely clear what the torso guns actually are).

I could choose two heavy flamers from the Knight appendix at 17 points each. That would be perfectly WYSIWYG and from the same Faction. But Magdalena is a Sororitas Knight - the background is not that she is seconded or oathsworn to the Sisters, but that she is actually part of their armory. Two heavy flamers are also two separate weapons, capable of firing at two different units under 8th ed rules - that didn't seem entirely reasonable given the weapons' placement.

Instead, I chose to go with an immolation flamer (35pts) from the Sororitas appendix. This is a uniquely Sisters' weapon (not just a twin-linked heavy flamer) and so seemed in character. I reasoned it was fair to use the Sisters' appendix for the points values because Knights and Sisters have the same BS (3+) and so weapons are equally effective. It was also the case that the weapons which appeared in both appendices - heavy flamer and meltagun - were the same points values, suggesting parity.

For the torso guns, I considered using hurricane bolters - that is, after all, what their appearance is inspired by. But that would have meant drawing from a different Faction (Space Marines) and I didn't want to do that. I could have counted them as heavy stubbers but that didn't seem quite right (it is not one of the "holy trinity"). Instead, I reasoned they were basically multi-barreled heavy bolters synchronized to fire together - twin-linked heavy bolters at 17 points.

So, Magdalena points out as follows:

Basic Knight chassis: 320pts
Thunderstrike gauntlet: 35pts
Thermal cannon: 76pts
Titanic feet: 0pts
Immolation flamer: 35pts
Twin heavy bolter: 17pts
TOTAL: 483pts

To calculate Power Rating requires a bit more math, and a degree of fudging. Firstly, I calculated the points cost of each of the five classes of Knight in the Index (basic weapon loadout, no carapace weapon) and compared it to the Power Rating, getting a pts : PR ratio;

Errant: 430pts / 23PR = 18.7 ratio
Paladin: 458pts / 24PR = 19.08 ratio
Warden: 466pts / 25PR = 18.64 ratio
Gallant: 389pts / 21PR = 18.52 ratio
Crusader: 512pts / 27PR = 18.96 ratio
(all ratios rounded to two decimal places)

I then averaged the ratios (getting 18.78) and divided Magdalena's points value by that to get a Power Rating of 25.71. That rounds up to 26, of course, so her pts:PR ratio is 18.58. This gives her the second "worse" ratio (after the Gallant) but the actual variation is minor (a 26PR Knight at the "best" ratio would be 496pts, only 13 points more than she is).

In terms of Keywords, it would be an unfair advantage to change them - the Faction Keywords remain IMPERIUM, QUESTOR IMPERIALIS and <HOUSEHOLD>. The chosen household is, of course, CRYSTAL LADY but there is no synergy between my Sisters' <ORDER> Faction Keyword. My army will be unified by the IMPERIUM Faction Keyword. The non-Faction Keywords of TITANIC and VEHICLE remain, with the individual class of Knight being replaced with KNIGHT APOSTLE.

So that was how I went about using the material in the Indices to create a unique entry for my army. Again, such things are only intended for fun games and with your opponent's permission. But I hope this exercise has not only shown you how I did it, but also encouraged you to consider doing similar things. In 8th edition, we might be seeing a return to the glory days of vehicle design rules and other imaginative, freeform unit creation and army selection!

Let me know what you think!

=][= Danforth Laertes

Sunday, June 11, 2017

"Magdalena" Apostle-Class Knight-Titan pt I: Assembly

Although the Sisters of Battle do not have Knights as part of their army list, an allied Knight-Titan is a popular choice. My recent return to painting 40K models after a long hiatus was inspired by the Dreamforge Leviathan Crusader and thinking it would make a great Sisters of Battle Knight-Titan.

The kit has a number of swappable weapons - it comes with a rotary cannon and a large sword. I didn't want those, and so purchased the Mauler Claw (basically a power fist) and the Nova Cannon (which looks very much like a huge melta weapon).

As you can see in this video and those that follow, the Leviathan kit has almost limitless poseabilty (and even comes with little weeny screws!) and can be assembled with swappable weapons and points of articulation. I did not want to do that - I always consider wargaming miniatures to be models, not toys, and such things can easily break. But I also wanted to customize the model significantly, and that would interfere with articulation.


This is the initially assembly. The major change I made was to leave the carapace plate off the top of the torso and replace it with the cap from a fruit-juice bottle (the orange component). I also cut a section out of the chest plate, allowing it to be moved flatter against the torso. This allowed me to move the head (cut down and with a curved rear made from a plumbing piece) from being sunk between the shoulders and instead mount it where a human's head would be, using the bottle-cap as a gorget.


The next images I have jump quite a bit ahead in the process. The weapons have been assembled and attached and I started building the backpack (from spare vehicle armor plates). In these pictures, the armor plates are just taped in place to see what they look like. The tubes leading from the "arc reactor" in the chest (and the backpack pipes) are Lego components. The power fist has been assembled pointing in a meaningful manner - the "Mauler Claw" has virtually all the articulation of a human hand, so this was very easy to do. As the articulating components were all plastic, I fused all the joints with some thin polycement drawn into the gaps by capillary action, and a couple of strategic pins superglued in place.

Maxmini Gothic Backpacks

The inspiration for the backpack came from the Maxmini Gothic Backpacks rather than the Sisters of Battle armor (although I was drawing on that for other armor elements). These are a popular third-party component for Sisters, although perhaps a little overscaled for Sisters' infantry. I kitbashed the original components to make the new exhaust stacks.

She is based on an old terrain piece I had kicking about in my bitz box - the Aquila lander from "Battle for Macragge". I filled the underside with resin and drilled holes for multiple pins.

A brief discussion of what I am trying to achieve seems apropos. While Knight-Titans in 40K have a very distinctive look - quasi-humanoid "beetle-backed" forms with their heads slung between their shoulders, often with structures rising above them - I wanted Magdalena to look different. Specifically, I wanted her to look as much like a Sister of Battle as possible. This is why I moved the head inside a gorget on top of the shoulders. In addition to adding the backpack, I modified the chest - moving it backwards to close-up the over-large void left by removal of the head, but also adding in pipes leading from a central circular detail (rather than a skull icon, I created something that looks a little like an Iron Man "arc reactor"!) I also placed curved armor plates within the void, intended to suggest cleavage revealed by a low-cut neckline (as I have mentioned before, the hyper-femininity of the Sisters' armor is not only justified by essential).

A couple of images which I drew heavily on for various details are reproduced here.

"The Sister of Battle"  by LordHannu

"Sisters of Battle Katrina" by Haxiaowei

Both of these are fan-art pieces, and so differ from the classic Sisters armor - but they each had elements I really liked. The curved hip armor of the upper image was attractive (and worked well with the armor of the Leviathan, which left the hip joint vulnerable). The fleur-de-lis over the belly and the large fleurs on the thigh plates (as well as the sculpted elements on other plates) we something I wanted to reproduce too.


The above images show the next stage of design - and debate about what I was going to do. Initially, I was considering something rising from the center of the backpack (hence the mounting point) but that did not work with the vents. The mounting point was later removed. Similarly, you can see the debate about what weapons she should have mounted in her chest. The heavy-bolters were too large. The missile launchers seemed more visually appropriate. In the end, I used some plastic tube to scratch-build hurricane bolters inspired by Centurions.

The curved hip armor was built by cutting three identical pieces of thin plasticard (from a paper template) and then laminating them together with plastic cement, holding them in a jig to preserve the curve while they dried. I've used this method before, and it works very well indeed. They were simply then glued in place.


Here is the final assembly with base-coats on (the base has been pretty much painted in a dull red with weathering, while she is simply sprayed silver). A lot of components - her head and all the armor - are left off for painting (and, in fact, many of them aren't even finished). You can see where the mounting point on the rear of the backpack has been removed and replaced with a simple "fence"-style ram from the Sisters of Battle sprue.

Painting has got a bit further than this (although not much!) and so there will be further posts. But, for now, let me know what you think!

=][= Danforth Laertes



Saturday, May 27, 2017

Furthery Tigery Musings....

(Yeah, another non-Sisters post - sorry, followers!)

It's Saturday morning and I am just sitting here thinking about 40K stuff - specifically, the fanon background I wrote for Primaris Marines in the Fighting Tigers of Veda (a Chapter created by Kenton Kilgore). Some unfocused musings on how I would edit for the second draft, based on re-reading my initial draft and delving deeper into Kenton's background;

  1. More needs to be made of the nature of the memories the Primaris were implanted with - it is more than simply learning what went on before, and in fact rises to the level of having experienced it. In fact, it may be best to treat this NOT as implantation of memories - but an unintended side-effect of the Primaris Council process used on cloned Tigers. The conspirators may have initially intended simply to replace Khandar Madu with a compliant clone, and find themselves with something both better . . . and worse! . . . for their purposes
  2. The conflict between the "current incarnation" and "all incarnations" should be played up, and done so in a spiritual manner. Once again, I have fallen (although not as badly) into the trap of creating fluff which is too much "sci-fi" and not enough "fantasy". Khandar Madu should have a crisis of faith when confronted by the Rajasath - here is someone not only physically superior to her, but in fact the culmination of all her incarnations.
  3. This conflict should, in fact, be a crisis of faith for the whole Chapter - and something that is NOT resolved simply by the Rajasath rejecting the Crusade and throwing off the shackles of hypno-indoctrination. The Fighting Tigers seek nirvana as a release from purusha by following dharma (that is, interment in a Dreadnought and freedom from having to reincarnate to fight for the Emperor as a reward for serving him so well). The Primaris Marines (or, as I might call them, bodhisattva EDIT that term is not the best, and had already been used to refer to Dreadnoughts; jatismara is better) walk a slightly different path. There should be a crisis of faith - or, at least, one should be inevitable when the Rajasath returns - over whether or not having ones next incarnation be a bodhisattva jatismara and so serve dharma that way.
  4. A number of the Tigers on Crusade should choose the Primaris upgrade - with the attendant gaining of memories from previous incarnations.
  5. More should be made of the essential similarity between Khandar Madu's disaffection with the Imperium (described as looking askance at "the bureaucratic inefficiency, institutionalized brutality, and lack of foresight and cohesiveness that permeates the crumbling Imperium" by Kenton) and Guilliman's despair on awakening ("This bloated, rotting carcass of an empire is driven not by reason and hope but by fear, hate and ignorance.") Initially, there should be conflict between them - even though they do not meet (directly, at least; Guilliman meets the Rajasath) but then they come to understand each other. Madu rejects the call to join the Crusade not just because it will leave Veda undefended, but also because she thinks Guilliman will be just one more Britannicus. The Rajasath, of course, calls for the Tigers to join the Crusade saying Guilliman is different (but not believing it - because she believes what Britannicus does) but then comes to realize that, in fact, Guilliman is like Khandar Madu and not like Britannicus thinks and the Rajasath fears. Does that make sense?
  6. The Cicatrix Maledictum has a huge bulge just east of the Maelstrom ... which is right where Veda is! I think it is reasonable to say the Regulus system sits "in the eye of a storm", but it should be surrounded by enemies and warping energies - and it should be under assault from the re-invigorated Warband Bloodcomet right from the start of the story.
  7. Guilliman should charge the Rajasath to return to Veda, hold it, and hold that area of the Imperium. With the Cicatrix Maeldictum causing all sorts of problems, the Crusade cannot get there - but maybe the Tigers can hold it and the surrounding area. This allows for (if not alliance) at least a détente between the Ultramarines (and the wider Imperium) and the Tigers.
So, those are my thoughts - essentially, an addition of more "spirituality" to the piece, a creation of a specific Vedic term for Primaris Marines (at least those made from Tiger clones and via the Primaris Council process), a crisis of faith brewing even if Veda survives (which, of course, it will!), and an advancement of the story elements Kenton established.

So, with all that, it's time to get back to the writing desk and see what I can come up with for the second draft! Let me know what you think!

=][= Danforth Laertes

Thursday, May 25, 2017

The Schism of the Tigers and Rajasath Khandar Madu

If you have read my welcome post, you will know I am a huge fan of the work of Kenton Kilgore, proprietor of "The Jungle" - perhaps the very best 40K website out there. His "beer-and-pretzels" approach to 40K gaming, as well as his detailed and innovative background, is always a pleasure to read. His site (and the accompanying Facebook page) are friendly and welcoming places to visit.

When I read the background for the Gathering Storm and the return of the Primarch, I immediately thought of the Fighting Tigers of Veda - as shown in their timeline, they suffered greatly under rigid and harsh command of the Captain of the Ultramarines 2nd Company Lucius Tiberius Britannicus after their Chapter was all-but wiped out during the Shindering of the Templars. (Just as an aside - do you see one reason why I love his work? Wonderfully detailed background!) How would the Tigers react to not only the return of the Ultramarines Primarch, but him assuming command of the Imperium's military? Cut off from the core worlds of Terra and Mars by the Cicatrix Maledictum, would Guilliman's Primaris reinforcements ever come to Veda ... and would they be welcomed if they did?

Kenton and I spoke briefly about this on his Facebook page, but - ultimately - he made the sensible, adult decision to NOT buy any Primaris Marines as he had 1) painted enough tiger stripes to last a lifetime and 2) he had a massive stash of unpainted models already. But I hadn't painted quite so many tiger stripes (and we all have a stash of unpainted models, don't we?) and so I decided I wanted to paint a small force of "Primaris Tigers".

I'd always considered the Tigers to be canon for "my" 40K universe - Raja Khandar Madu is just as much a part of it as Verity, Canoness Shania, Palatine Alicia Sanguinia, Inquisitor Danforth Laertes, the Athanasians and the rest (one of the Athanasians is actually going to be painted as a Tiger) - but I had never expanded the background with anything of my own invention.

Such a thing might seem exceedingly presumptions - it is, after all, not MY background or army. But it can also be seen as an homage to work well-done, in a similar manner to writing "fanfic" for our favorite series (or even creating unique background for our 40K armies). The latter is absolutely my intention - to build on and honor Kenton's work, not to replace it.

So I gave some thought to it and came up with the following background for Rajasath Khandar Madu and the Primaris Tigris. Please note; this is not "40K canonical" (none of my background is, of course) but NEITHER is it "Kenton canonical" (unless he wants to add it or parts thereof in - which would be both perfectly OK and incredibly humbling). This is my personal work, personal interpretation, and is intended as a homage to Kenton's excellent work. All characters, settings, events etc. are the work of Kenton and / or Games Workshop. This work will also probably only make sense to those familiar with the Fighting Tigers' background and history - so be sure to check that out!

EDIT: I had some additional thoughts and ideas, which I have written down here, for the changes that need to be made for the second draft.

With all of that out of the way, let's learn how the Imperium's powers-that-be sought to gain control over the famously-independent Fighting Tigers of Veda . . .


The Indomitus Crusade began at the dawn of the 42nd millennium and swept from the core worlds of Terra and Mars, seeking to liberate the beleaguered planets of the Imperium. Although all the Imperium's armed forces participated, united under the banner of Roboute Guilliman, resurrected Primarch of the Ultramarines and now Lord Commander of the Imperium, it was Archmagos Belisarius Cawl's masterwork, the Primaris Astartes, that were the lynchpin of the strategy.

Guilliman, a statesman as well as a soldier, used the Primaris Marines in a variety of ways. To Chapters who had suffered grievous casualties during the Black Crusade, he sent them as reinforcements to bolster their strength. To armies of the Astra Militarum, Adepta Sororitas or other forces he sent Primaris Councils - the living embodiment of the genius of the Primarchs - tactical advisors. In the Ultima Founding he created completely new Chapters, entirely made of Primaris Astartes.

But there were other ways the Primaris were used, and some of these - despite Guilliman's noble intentions and best efforts - fell foul of the ambition of cold-hearted men close to the heart of Imperial power.

The Fighting Tigers had been founded during the Age of Apostasy in the 36th millennium. Winning the planet of Veda on the eastern side of the Maelstrom from Drukhari pirates, they had adopted local customs and begun to recruit from the planet.

But all was not well; the Tigers claim the High Lords of Terra questioned their loyalty during the Badab War, and ordered them to stay out of the conflict. Whatever the truth of that, it is certainly the case Imperial aid was not forthcoming when Chaos forces ravaged the system, all-but-destroying the Tigers and slaughtering the native Vedics.

This was a dark time for the Tigers; their very existence hung by a thread and there were not permitted to rebuild on their own terms. Suspicion of the native traditions of Veda and political machinations in the Senatorum Imperalis placed Lucius Tiberius Britannicus, Captain of the Second Company of the Ultramarines, in temporary command. He enforced strict adherence to the Codex Astartes and suppressed the beloved traditions and customs of the Tigers. Eventually, Rajas Surya and Vashtar assumed command and - with the assistance of the Space Wolves - began recruiting female Marines and established the practice of purusha; the cloning of aspirants rather than recruiting them from the native population.

These practices harm the relationship between the Tigers and the wider Imperium; although loyal to a fault, the Tigers are distrusted and misunderstood. The rumors of tiger-striped Marines in the company of daemonic apparitions has not helped either. The Ecclesiarchy finds the Tigers' endorsement and encouragement of Vedic superstition (rather than the approved strictures of the Imperial Cult) troubling, and even the eyes of the Inquisition have turned to Veda on occasion - it is rumored both organizations have spies, agitators and sleeper agents embedded on the planet. But the bureaucracy of the Imperium moves slowly and there are always more pressing threats, and so the Tigers had always been tolerated and left unmolested. But that was about to change.

The wheels of the Imperium might spin slowly, but they do so with the inevitability of the stars themselves. Amid the preparations for the Indomitus Crusade a plot was hatched to bring the Tigers to heel. It was an alliance of convenience; Marine officers silently seething at the Tigers' rejection of the Codex, Administratum functionaries seeking compliance rather than independence, Inquisitors convinced of treachery, Ecclesiarchy clergy seeing heresy in the Vedic religion, Tech-priests angry at the Tigers' refusal to tithe geneseed. And it would be the Tigers' unique practice of purusha and suspicions about Khandar Madu growing within the ranks of even her own tanadars that would give them their opportunity.

Beginning her career as a fierce Tiger of Kali, her rise through the ranks was meteoric and it was barely two-centuries before she was appointed Raja of Jatis Mahaduyana. Since Shamshir Talatra's dismissal as Raja of Jatis Ghuyarashtra and replacement by the less-experienced Chandramatie Bahl, she had expanded her authority and reorganized many sections of the Chapter, gathering the finest personnel to her and re-assigning less-skilled Marines. Officially, all of these actions were taken to better run the Chapter until a suitable replacement for Talatra could be found - but rumors they were part of a plan to consolidate all power under her and do away with the two-regent system that had been in place for millennia grew, especially among disaffected tanadars of Jatis Ghuyarashtra who felt their influence was unreasonably curtailed by the upstart redhead.

It was in the midst of this whispered uncertainty the news of the Primarch's return reached the Fighting Tigers. With it came a call to join the Indomitus Crusade under Guilliman and an offer of aid - reinforcements of Primaris Marines for the beleaguered Tigers. There was consternation and debate; once they have begun a tradition, the Tigers do not cast it aside. But now their traditions - of purusha and dharma - conflicted. It was their dharma to serve the Imperium, to be part of the galaxy-wide crusade the new Lord Commander had called. Recorded with bitter grief and impotent rage in the Rigsamayajur, the Tigers' holy verses and history, was the tale of how they had been forbidden to participate in the Badab War. Now the Imperium called them - how could they not answer?

But it was also their dharma to defend Veda; the Cicatrix Maledictum had torn the galaxy in twain and brought war to the whole Imperium, but to the Tigers this was a difference of degree, not kind. On the very edge of the Maelstrom, Veda had always suffered from attacks from raiders, pirates and corsairs. Now these attacks grew in strength and gained cohesion and organization - Traitor Astartes from the Black Legion sent by Abaddon marshaled the rag-tag forces into a true threat to Veda.

And how could the Tigers accept Guilliman's aid when it came in the form of the discarding the sacred tradition of purusha? The Primaris Astartes Guilliman offered were not reincarnations of fallen Tigers - they were new Marines, created on Mars in different ways. Even if made with the geneseed of the White Scars - the Tigers' progenitors - they were not Tigers. And, of course, this was Guilliman - father of the hated Ultramarines. Britannicus had suppressed Vedic traditions, had come close to pressing the Tigers inextricably into the mold of the Codex Astartes. Would not Guilliman be even worse?

Had there still been two Rajas on Veda, rather than one and an awed girl standing in the other's shadow, things might have been different. But, then again, had the hot-headed Shamshir Talatra been there to unilaterally take Jatis Ghuyarashtra to join the Crusade, that would have left Khandar Madu with too-few troops to defend Veda and fulfil her other obligations. The Tigers' near-destruction and the rape of Veda by the Warband Bloodcomet weighed heavily on the Raja, and so - despite the wishes of some of her advisors who felt dharma would be better served by joining the Crusade - she made the decision to remain apart from it, to defend Veda and refuse Guilliman's Primaris reinforcements. Thus both purusha and dharma would be satisfied.

Khandar Madu was drafting her response - a response the conspirators could have guessed and probably written word-for-word - when a lone figure came to the door of the math, the fortress-monastery of the Fighting Tigers, and demanded entrance and audience. She was tall - taller than any Tiger - and dressed in armor of a design none of the Tigers of Tvashtri could recognize. Yet the armor was white striped with black and the steel-eyed face gazing imperiously on the stunned guards was one they all knew; Raja Khandar Madu.

How was this possible? The next incarnation of Khandar Madu had reached the cusp of adolescence years before and slumbered in cryogenic stasis deep within the math - the Tigers of Savitri verified it, even piercing the seal of the cryotube and testing her DNA. The Tigers of Brihaspati could sense none of the Warp-taint that might come from temporal distortion due to travel through the sea of souls - this was not some future-version of their Raja. She willingly submitted to genetic testing and psychic examination; there was only one conclusion but it was a riddle to say it - she was Khandar Madu but who was she?

She demanded to address the whole Chapter. The "other" Khandar Madu refused, but granted her a private audience with her and her most trusted advisers. And the tale the newcomer unfolded was almost beyond belief.

A stasis ampoule containing a cryo-temporally frozen blastocyst had been stolen from the gene-vaults on Veda a decade before. The newcomer casually spoke of theft and deception, and offered no apology or excuse - the importance of the project brushed such conventional morality aside, although the Vedics were aghast at this violation of dharma. That embryo had been her. "A clone of the Raja?" asked Chandramatie Bahl.

"No," said the newcomer with a damnably-familiar smile. "The Raja."

Hidden deep beneath the oxide surface of Mars, in ancient labyrinths of the Mechanicus, Tech-Adepts worked on this most-precious of jewels, geneforging the nascent embryo into a Primaris Astartes. Archaeotech psycho-gnostic tutelary engines had been used to implant not only martial skills and tactical acumen, but also all the knowledge of her previous incarnations, culled from illicitly-obtained personal logs and campaign records.

The result, after a standard Terran decade of hyper-maturation, was a unique Primaris Astartes. Not merely because she was female, nor even that the raw material she had been geneforged from had been cloned rather than born, but because of the mental engrams seared into her mind by the tutelary engines. She was more than a clone, more than even a copy, of Khandar Madu - she also possessed the accumulated knowledge of her previous incarnations, allied with the tactical genius of the Primaris Councils. "So perhaps, Chandramatie," she mused, "it is not correct to say I am the Raja - for I am greater than that." What she did not say, and what she perhaps did not know, is that the tutelary engines had inculcated an unswerving loyalty and devotion to her creators during gestation.

That, of course, was why she demanded what she did. "You will step down," she told her stunned counterpart. "You will once again become a Kshatriya. If you serve the Tigers - and me - loyally and well, I will keep you at that rank. If you fail me, you shall become a simple Tiger of Kali and serve there. I shall become Raja of Mahaduyana - and only Raja of Mahaduyana," she added pointedly, with a glance at Chandramatie. "I will not plot and scheme to undo the tradition our sacred founder Shiva left us. Jatis Ghuyarashtra will have its independence."

The current Raja stood. "I refuse," she said simply. "You are no Raja and no Tiger. You are scarcely an Astartes - you are the product of Ultramarine treachery and the machinations of black-hearted men. I name you harijan, outcast. Get you gone ere I am forced to break tradition and strike you."

The newcomer stood herself, but she smiled as she looked down on the shorter Marine. "I will go, Rajaatje," she said, using the diminutive of the title Raja, "but I go to war alongside Guilliman, with the chosen son of the Brahman, and I do not think I will go alone. Those here have heard my words, and they will take them to the rest of the Chapter. And furthermore they will take this; you would refuse the aid of Guilliman, keep the Tigers isolated from the Imperium in its darkest hour, standing alone because of your own pride and hatred. You cannot find room in your heart for forgiveness, for alliance. I tell you this - Guilliman is not Britannicus and for too-long we have languished and suffered far from the Brahman's love. You call me harijan? I say you have made us all outcast, and would keep us that way rather than surrender the power you have grasped. Farewell, little one."

With that, the Rajasath* - as she soon came to be known by both factions in the Schism of the Tigers - strode from the hall, followed an instant later by some whose loyalty the Raja had thought beyond question. Yet, truly, were they disloyal? The Tigers' practice of purusha meant the Rajasath could not be called an impostor - with the accumulated knowledge and experience of all her previous incarnations, was she not the truest, purest expression of purusha? How could she be leading them contrary to dharma if she joined them to the Indomitus Crusade?

For join the Crusade they did, banding together into a powerful force fully half the Chapter strong and fighting not merely alongside but for Guilliman and his commanders. The Rajasath organized the force more in keeping with dictates of the Codex Astartes, willingly placing her troops under the command of Ultramarines and even referring to ranks, units and tactics by Imperial Gothic names rather than Vedic. She ordered her subordinates to not mention the Schism, instead presenting herself to Guilliman as Raja Khandar Madu of the Fighting Tigers. To her tanadars, she said this was to preserve the Tigers' honor - and she might have even believed it herself, but the real reason was far darker. Guilliman was not privy to the conspirators' plots and machinations, and while he would have publicly scorned the unorthodox Chapter's traditions (but perhaps given them private grudging respect) he certainly would have condemned such infighting as weakening the Imperium and doing the work of Chaos.

Back on Veda, the Raja had let the schismatics leave unmolested - no Tiger had raised claw against another before, and she was not about to start now. She herself was wracked with doubts - had she grasped at power? Were her motives pure or was she corrupted by ambition, by pride? What was to be gained by isolation, by refusal to work closely with others? Had she led the Chapter for the Brahman or for herself? The Schism had divided the Chapter, and not by jatis - some of Ghuyarashtra had remained with her and some of Mahaduyana had joined the Rajasath. The Schism split sabhas and squads, dividing warriors who had fought alongside each other for centuries. And it even divided Khandar Madu in her own mind, leaving her alone at night in her cell, her mind churning with questions and recriminations denying her meditation or sleep.

But she did not have the luxury of mournful introspection for long. The Rajasath's forces had taken significant fleet assets, and so when the reinvigorated forces of Baalzephon Zgorch, the fallen Templar who led the Warband Bloodcomet, now strengthened with Abaddon's Black Legion and other fell troops, burst out of the Maelstrom, there was little the Tigers could do to stop them. The Traitors made planetfall on Veda and the other planets of the Regulus system, and soon the Tigers found themselves under siege. That the Tigers of Brihaspati reported sensing the echo of an astropathic choir within the eddies of the Warp, as if the Traitors had been deliberately drawn to Veda to pin down and destroy the only Tigers not loyal to the conspirators' servant, was not questioned, but neither was it considered important. The Raja did not have time to assign blame - she and her Chapter were fighting for their lives. The force that had followed the Rajasath had not been carefully chosen to leave an effective defensive force on the homeworld, and the Tigers were swiftly pushed back, almost to the walls of their fortresses.

But half-a-segmentum away, the Rajasath was having her own crisis.

To make their creation as perfect, as persuasive to the intensely-loyal and partisan Tigers as possible, the conspiritors had not only used the embryo of Khandar Madu, but also her geneseed. Not the geneseed of the White Scars, nor even merely the Tigers' own geneseed, but Khandar Madu's own geneseed, extracted from her mature progenitor glands decades before and stolen from the vaults on Veda. It had been implanted into their clone using the same process as used for the Primaris Councils, a process designed to give a deeper connection to the genesire, a closer union with the progenitor.

Astartes geneseed is not merely a physical, biological thing. The knowledge to create the Primarchs is lost to all but the Emperor and the Mechanicus never knew it. The Master of Mankind treated with dark powers to gain this forbidden knowledge, and so the geneseed has a strong psychic component, a spiritual cord that binds all Astartes of the same geneline. For most Marines, this is but an unconscious awareness, a connection to the Primarch and a tendency to certain personality traits and patterns of thought. For some, such as the Blood Angels and their Successors, events in their history deepen this psychic connection. But the geneforging process of the Primaris Councils, coupled with the use of mature geneseed carried by a clone-sister, had caused unexpected results. Khandar Madu had borne it within her, it absorbing not only her implants' DNA but also her spirit and will. The Tech-Priests and conspirators had been pleased with the way the Rajasath was a clone of the Raja in more than genetics, but they had never even suspected the real reason why.

But now this closeness worked against them. The independent spirit of the Tigers, of all the incarnations of Khandar Madu, began to re-assert itself. Something itched at her mind, at her soul - she felt confined, even out of armor, as if she were chained and bound . Her subconscious was becoming aware of the hypno-indoctrination to unquestioning loyalty to masters she did not know. But now she began to question; questioning her own decisions, questioning if they even were her decisions. Why had she chosen to remake the Tigers in the image of orthodoxy? She remembered her previous incarnations, how they had fought bravely for the Imperium but on their own terms, with their own traditions, proudly upholding the Vedic way of life. Why had she abandoned that?

Her closest advisers noticed it first; she returned to referring to units and tactics by traditional names, speaking more often in Vedic, withdrawing units from the command of non-Tiger officers. They were puzzled by it - had she not been the one to advocate a closer union with the wider Imperium? Were the promised benefits of this closeness not the reason they had followed her? But they accepted it and were, for the most part, comforted and pleased.

But soon the conspirators noticed it, and they were troubled.

It was an Ultramarines Lieutenant called Britannicus - a scion of the same Macragge noble family as the dictator who had nearly destroyed the Tigers - who came to her. He was one of the plotters, deep in the conspiracy, fanatically devoted to the Codex Astartes and what he thought was the will of his Primarch. He was eager to return the Imperium to not merely the Imperial Truth but what he saw as the most perfect society - the style of government practiced by the Ultramarines within Ultramar. For him, the taming of the Tigers was but the first step in spreading Guilliman's vision across the whole Imperium.

"Why are you doing this?" he demanded. "Why do you embrace heterodox tactics and doctrine, speaking that barbaric pidgin tongue and practicing primitive superstitions? Have you no pride, no sense of who you are? You are a Primaris Astartes, not some mongrel Marine from a backwater planet!"

"I am a Tiger," she growled, narrowing her eyes to steely slits. "That is all the sense of who I am I need."

"You were not created for this!" he roared. "We made you . . ."

"We made me?" she repeated. "You . . . made . . ." Slowly, the pieces fell into place - the embryo's theft which she had never questioned, the orders she had followed which she could not remember receiving, the dreams the Tech-Priests had told her to dismiss, the gnawing feeling of disquiet and imprisonment . . . "You made me," she snarled. "You made me so you could use me, use me to bring the Tigers to heel!"

"Yes!" boasted Britannicus. "You have served your purpose - the Tigers are sundered. Yours have rallied to Lord Guilliman's banner and those who rejected his leadership will soon be crushed on Veda." Suddenly, the truth of the plot was plain to her - she had split the Tigers, taking with her a force united by emotion rather than tactical necessity, leaving Veda woefully undefended. In her eagerness to serve the Imperium, she had discarded her dharma.

"No . . ." she said. "No - not while I draw breath . . ."

Britannicus laughed. "We made you, girl - and we can destroy you just as easily!"

With an enraged roar, she charged him, knocking him backwards and into the wall. She was Primaris, taller and stronger than him, but he was wearing power armor - he had come to her while she was preparing for her rest-cycle and wearing only a simple tunic. Her weapons were across the room and his power sword was girt at his side. With a triumphant grin, he snatched it from its scabbard and swung at her.

Desperately, she ducked the blow and slammed into him again, even her enhanced flesh bruising against the ceramite of his armor. Inside the arc of the weapon, he brought the pommel down on her shoulder, shattering bones. Her return stroke lifted him off his feet as her fist came up under his chin like a krak grenade.

The two titans crashed through the wall of her cell, bursting into the corridors of Guilliman's battle-barge, Macragge's Vengeance. Marines and serfs scattered as they fought, blows denting the bulkheads and tearing the lumo-skulls from the walls. She kicked him backwards, her yell of triumph turning into a scream of pain as his blade bit deep into her side. As she stumbled, head bowed, he loomed over her, sword reversed to piece through the back of her offered neck and execute her like the traitor she was. "And now you die!" he cried. "And with you, the rebellion of the Tigers!"

He lunged but, with convulsive strength and a roar of denial, she twisted and leapt upwards, deliberately transfixing herself through the chest, trapping the sword in her own flesh. She screamed in agony as the blade's disruption field ground her ribs to powder and chewed her organs to offal, but it was Britannicus who stood dumbfounded at her fist clamped around his wrist, holding the sword in place so he could not tear it free and strike again.

And then he choked and gasped as her massive hand clamped like a docking claw around his throat and squeezed and squeezed and squeezed. He struggled, but she was so much bigger and stronger than him and when - with a grunt of effort - she lifted him off the ground he had no purchase. His grip slackened, the sword's field dying as his fingers slid off the hilt. He battered at her with his free hand, punching her in the face and chest, but she was unfazed and his blows were growing weaker.

His eyes flickered and rolled back, his head lolling. She grunted in satisfaction and threw him backwards, pulling the sword from her body with an effort. Trembling, she leant on it for support, even her enhanced body threatening to go into shock. One of her Marines ran up to her, offering her support. "Khandar!" he exclaimed.

She shook her head. "No," she gasped. "Not Khandar. Rajasath - that is all I am. We leave the Crusade, we return to Veda - I hope we are not too late."

At her feet, Britannicus coughed and spat. "Traitor!" he croaked.

"Perhaps," she agreed, "but if what you display is loyalty, then I wear my stripes with pride." Around the two of them a circle of both Tigers and Ultramarines had gathered. Britannicus' consciousness was returning and the gleam of cunning was back in his eyes - the situation might have turned ugly, but for the arrival of the Primarch.

"What is the meaning of this commotion?" Guilliman walked through his Astartes like a tiger through the jungle. "You brawl with my men? Explain yourself, Raja!"

The Rajasath inclined her head deferentially. "Honored sahib," she said formally, "I beg pardon - but I have a tale of treachery to tell. This man and his cabal have sought to set Marine against Marine, to destroy a Chapter of loyal Astartes for their own gain. The Tigers stand on the knife-edge of destruction because of him!"

"No!" exclaimed Britannicus, struggling to his feet. "No, my lord!"

"You deny the charge?" asked Guilliman, fixing his Marine with a gaze as cold and blue as the winter sky over Hera's Fortress. The Primarch was a leader of men, a statesman and politician without peer, and it would be impossible for one of his genesons to lie to him. "The Raja speaks falsehood?"

"Yes, my lord!" Britannicus exclaimed. "My lord, we did not do it for our own gain! We did it for you, my lord! The Tigers have ever been a thorn in our side, rebelling against the dictates of the sacred Codex, insolently flaunting their heresy and caring nothing for your dictates! We have an opportunity, my lord! An opportunity to unite the Imperium under your banner, to place we Astartes where we should be - in command, as rulers of humanity. The Wolves are all-but-destroyed, the Angels will fall to the Devourer soon enough. The Tigers must be next. We did it for you, my lord! It was all for your vision! Now strike down this girl and . . ."

With an inarticulate roar, Guilliman backhanded his treasonous Lieutenant across the face with the Hand of Dominion, sending him flying backwards and shattering his skull. "I made this Crusade to serve humanity, not lead it!" he cried. "This is what the Imperium has become - a moribund carcass of fear and superstition driven by ambition and pride!" He strode forward through his stunned Chapter and lifted Britannicus' corpse, driving his fingers into his neck and tearing out his progenitor glands with a disgusting squelch. Very deliberately, he crushed the gobbets of flesh in his fist and dropped them to the floor. "Sic semper proditorum," he declared. He turned to the Rajasath. "He did not work alone." It was not a question.

"No, sahib," she answered.

"Then I will hunt them out," he promised. "Return to your Chapter," he told her. She nodded and offered him the hilt of the power sword. He shook his head. "Keep it, memsahib," he said with a smile. "Let it be a pledge between our Chapters - we have our differences, but . . ." He shrugged.

She nodded and limped back to her cell, bringing with her one of the matched lightning claws the Tech-Adepts of Mars had created for her. "Take this, Lord of Macragge, in the same vein."

He took it reverently. "I shall do so, Raja. Tell me," he asked, "will the Tigers accept my aid?"

"Your . . . aid? I . . ." She faltered. "I do not know," she admitted.

He nodded. "I thought as much. Perhaps they will surprise you, surprise us both. With you will go Magi-Biologis bearing stocks of Primaris geneseed from your progenitor Legion. If the Tigers permit it, they shall have new claws. If they do not, I only ask that the geneseed is held securely until it can be returned. Of course," he added with a grin, "that means you must hold the planet of Veda until the Imperium is at peace again."

"There will only ever be war," she said grimly.

"Exactly," replied Guilliman. He inclined his head. "May the Brahman watch over you until we meet again, Raja."

"The Emperor protects," she agreed.

And so the Rajasath and her Tigers left the Indomitus Crusade, plunging back through the Warp towards Veda in a desperate race against time, hoping they would not be too late. The Marines sought to save their Chapter, but for the Rajasath it was personal - the salvation of Veda would be atonement for her own weakness and failings.

* The term "Rajasath" was used by both factions because of the double meaning of the (Sanskrit) word "sath"; when used as a suffix it means false, unreal or bad - but when used on its own it means "a good man". Thus both sides in the schism found the title appropriate. After she rejected the name Khandar Madu, the name was still appropriate - she saw herself as a false Raja, but many others saw her as a good ruler, a queen without a kingdom upholding her dharma.


OK, so - SUPER long post. No real apologies for that. Some notes and thoughts;

Firstly, in the very midst of writing this Kenton and I spoke on Facebook and he expressed interest in a background that would allow for Primaris Marines in the Tigers. He actually said he would host it on The Jungle! I said he should probably read it first and decide if it fitted in - this is a pretty radical change.

Which is why I am publishing this NOW, even though it is arguably incomplete and in an almost-draft format; I wanted Kenton to have a gander at it and see what he thought. As I said in the beginning; this is MY background (basically "Tiger fanfic") for my 40K universe, and is NOT part of the official Fighting Tigers of Veda background established by Kenton.

My initial idea was to write this and when the boxed set came out convert the Gravis-Armored Captain into the Rajasath - I've ordered all the parts I needed to create her - and then post this background with pictures of model. But, with Kenton seeming eager to see it, I pulled the publication forward. I still intend to make the conversion, of course - and probably make some more Tigris Primaris to fight alongside her. (It is because of the pose of the basic model - holding a very "Ultramarine" sword aloft - that the Rajasath keeps only one lightning claw and gains a power sword. Well, that and the fact I just LOVE the look of that combination!)

A few notes on certain things in the narrative - the Primaris Councils are mentioned; these are an idea I had and will be converting up / writing background for. Essentially, they are groups of Primaris Astartes sent as tactical advisors to non-Astartes armies - they are genetically tweaked and hypno-indoctrinated to more closely express the tactical genius and personality of the Primarchs. It was just an interesting modelling project (a bunch of Primaris in different uniforms) but the idea worked well here.

I have been vague about who went with the Rajasath on Crusade - mostly because they aren't "my" characters, and I don't know them as well as Kenton does. I suppose it doesn't matter if Chandramatie Bahl, Jirbu Ghosh or whoever went with her or not - that would be a matter to be decided when armies are chosen for games.


Because, of course, this background is designed to allow lots of games - Tigers fighting Imperial forces loyal to the conspirators, fighting Chaos on Veda, fighting whoever on the way back through the Warp. The presence of the Primaris geneseed in the fleet returning to Veda and Guilliman's "take it or leave it" instructions gives the opportunity to add Primaris Marines in (either as "upgraded" Tigers or new recruits) or not, even missions to defend the vital geneseed from those who might want to steal to destroy it!

Finally, I wanted to draw on as much of Kenton's work as possible - I tried to tap into as many pieces of the Tigers' history as I could, particularly the takeover by Britannicus. The Ultramarines' practice of repeated recruitments from a single family allowed a sense of history, of vendetta, here. I tried to make Britannicus - while clearly the villain (or, at least, the one villain we see!) - have understandable motives; he is loyal to his idea of what Guilliman wants. Of course, the Primarch himself is more reasonable and heroic, a real leader of men, than Britannicus assumes.

There is a lot still unsaid here - who are the other conspirators? Are they all loyal to each other or, like Britannicus, do they have their own agendas? Were the Warband Bloodcomet summoned to the Regulus system, and by who? Was that real collusion with the powers of Chaos, or merely manipulation by Imperial agents?

And, of course, will the Rajasath make it back to Veda in time?

As I've said many times now; this is my own background and it is incomplete and open to interpretation and changes. I wrote it as a tribute and homage to Kenton's excellent work, and I humbly offer it to him to use, change, adapt, steal ideas from, completely ignore or even decry as totally false and hearsay as he sees fit. His website has given me hours and hours of pleasure and has inspired me in so much of my 40K hobby. I hope I can give a little bit back to him.

Let me know what you think and, please, check out the Fighting Tigers' website.


=][= Danforth Laertes